I was reading the first marker comments on the essays (was yakking on and on about them). I hated writing those stuff, the first marks were like, aargh! I could have written a different reflection and the markings would have been higher? Who knows. Maybe I should write more so that I wouldn't struggle on sentence construction (my critique). I would have to go in-depth into analysis and tackle the profundity of a variety of issues; the diurnal, the pedestrian, our consumer-driven lives, poverty, etc. The marker is a lawyer so I follow her lead. I read all the free papers and magazines yet I couldn't do sentences.
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